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You Picked Me Up

Lord, in my darkest moment
You were there
You picked me up,
carried me through the rain,
stood me on firm ground,
took my hand,
and guided me on.

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  • tomisb
    October 28

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    This is a statement right now. An answer to a prayer perhaps. A testimony of faith.
    As such I could not belittle it or critically appraise it. It just is. Now, if you want to create a work of art out of this make your experience touch me.
    Love,
    Tom B.