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The Promise

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This is our special day

When true love comes

full circle as we embrace.

A new beginning

as husband and wife.

 

Magical moments

shared by us

and all the ones we love.

Flowery scents fill the air

as I, my love. stop

and stare.

 

So much beauty surrounds us

as we say our vows to one and all.

 

God is our witness

 to our love so strong.

Together with Him,

we stand side by side

prepared for whatever lies ahead.

 

Hands entwined,

Hearts embraced

this is just the beginning

of God’s grace.

 

Joy, peace and love

all come from the Father above.

As each word is said

our vows will etch

into our hearts, soul and mind

the promise we make today.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I hope that you like this. Good Luck with the beginning of your new life. Congratulations

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 6

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    You created such a beautiful and heart felt wedding poem. I really like that you have included God within your verses. Thank you for taking part in my contest.


  • Nevel
    November 5

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    Oh, Such a lovely dedication-poem. Its very chearfully and hopeful done. Your poem drips of positive vibrations ...Great

    Erwin


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 5

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    Sis, this is the most beautiful poem I have read in a while. I love this and it is so true, that they now start their lives as husband and wife from the moment they said their vows. you are amazing.

    Joann


  • Nickelspring gold member
    November 5

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    This is beautiful, a lovely beginning to a new life!
    Nicely done!
    K


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 5

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    Aww Kat
    How beautiful and romantic
    You are back creating soft and loving pieces
    and I am sure everyone in Cathys family will treasure your words

    Good luck

    Mum xx

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