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~Benediction~



Father......NOT mine.

Forgive me.....WHY? I don't
want forgiveness.


For, I have sinned....Really?
I am God. I don't sin.


So, they sent a priest in
here. For what? What reason?
To cleanse my soul?

I don't need cleansing.

I don't need faith or false
religion.

I AM GOD....

Do you hear me? I decided who
was to die. It is their voices,
their cries that I hear in
my head. In my dreams,
their faces plague me.

You say that I need
to be one with God, to ask
him for forgiveness. You
stupid, stupid man. All this
time you don't get it, you
still don't understand.

I am not sick.

My soul is not weak.

All your prayers will
not save you. Your hail Marys,
your crosses and holy water...

all in vein.

What a waste of your
useless and pathetic time.

Not one of your prayers have
been answered. Not one.

Why is that?

Because...

I DON'T CARE!

Why should I? This
world has gone to shit, and
I am the one left cleaning it up.

Every life I took...

the cheating parents;
the hooker;
the killer;
the stripper;

All of them had it
coming. It was  MY choice.

And now there is you.
You, a man of "the cloth".
You have them all convinced
that God will save them
through prayer.

Yet here you sit counting
their "offering" like Scrooge
in a bank.

Your greed upon your
face, like a bloody steak
in front of a blood hound.

Do you see?

See that I am the
"Savior." The only one to save
the world. Yet!...here I
sit, bound by chains and
shackles like a common criminal.

Heh Heh Heh!

I will sit here, in the
dark and your death I can
see it unfold...I can smell
your rotting flesh now...

That's right...get out
now. While you can.

You can't save me,
you can't even save yourself.

For I am the ONE.

I am GOD.

I don't need your
prayers, your futile words.

Heh Heh!
 

Hear that?

Silence.

Silence falls upon you.
Upon me. Yet, I hear the
screams of those that
have followed your wicked ways.

All of them...

They died for me.

Heh Heh Heh!

I am GOD.

Author notes

This is a continuation from my story ~Memoires of Murder~


Part 1
Empty Carcass
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3848603



Part 2
~Birth of a Killer~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3924763



Part 3

~The Suffering~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3944421

Part4

~A Voice Without Reasoning~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4004399


Part 5

~My Masterpiece~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4010999


Part 6
~Trick or Treat~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4702575

Part 7
~My Madness~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4765093

Part 8
~Judgement Day~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5808785


For the record, I have never killed nor intend to kill anyone this is pure FICTION. This is also NOT meant to be anti-religious.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 6

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    Ohhh me likie! This is really portraying his insanity, almost as if he's fine and the rest of the world is nuts..lol. The repetition of him saying 'I am GOD' really drives home how warped his way of thinking is. I so look forward to the next instalment! (well it worked before...) I'm linking your BG now in an IM. Keep up the superb work hunni!
    Hugs


  • Firequeen
    November 3

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    OH MY
    well i haven't read the others from this but i so plan too.
    This is excellent.
    I have no words.
    Thank you for entering
    good luck in the contest
    Keep the ink flowing
    fire


  • Lexie -
    November 3

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    ooops, so excited i pressed the wrong key
    this is fantastic!!


  • Lexie -
    November 3
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    WoooHoooo!!!


  • Fallen Angel 2
    October 30

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    Wow. This piece is crazy. The creativity, the words, and the emotions are really good. Congrats. Very Original.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 27

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    Oh how very cool this is!
    Rock on and righteous!
    Can you pen a poem or what?!?!?!?
    All the best to you in this contest and I hope to see more continuations of this!

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