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Mad!

When you're mad
that anger surges like lighting...
Until it gets to its point of destination

When it hits
its like an army rushing at an enemy
its like a tsunami when it hits
its like fire burning up around you

Anger
so mighty
something you need
to learn how to control

But at times
you need to let it go

sometimes its needed
or else

its you that will be hit
with the madness

Author notes

I wrote this on an incident that I was going through that made me exstreemly mad!!

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  • Sinner69
    October 28

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    HOW TRUE IT IS

    YES ITS GOOD TO REALEASE THE ANGER AND MADNESS INSIDE OF U..IF NOT IT WILL CONSUME U....FELT THE PASSION TO EXPRESS URSELF AND DO IT WITH ATTITUDE...GREAT.