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Guilt's Prisoner

This feeling inside
It's killing me
My heart flutters when I see him
My eyes stick
Gaze into his
But my heart
It freezes when I see you
Ice grabs me
Won't let me go
I feel
Trapped
I am guilt's prisoner
Held in the shackles of your solemn gaze
And I fall though time
As I watch him disappear
And we continue
With this facade
This game we play
This 'love'...

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  • WonderfulDreamz
    October 28

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    Wow, Amazing! : P

    I really Loved it! : ) you really should keep writing!!
    You are really great detailed and i think that you are a really good writer!!
    Please i beg you to keep writing. Well that was kinda random!

  • HickUp
    October 28

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    Wow, I had to read this twice. This is one of those reads you can't just glance over because "huh?"will be the end result. Well worth slowing down for and I just wanted to jump up and down yellin' "so end it". Easier said then done for many.


  • xeroabyss II
    October 28

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    I think it would be easier to stalk tigers naked in the wild with bare hands, than to play this "game".
    At least when the tiger kills you, it will not make you feel mocked and foolish, cause you'll be lunch, served freshly dead....at least after the short (much shorter than loves) pain is gone