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Angelic smiles can be devilish...



As each day passes,
Another smile is added to a face,
And the warmth of a mother,
Is placed with gentle grace.

Then another is found a loving home,
While great care is taken too,
She simply brings the world alive,
When she says ‘hello’ to you.

An angelic little frame she has,
With looks that just stop traffic,
But get her on a devilish side,
Oh boy, you’ll simply panic.

Now her friends, they love her all the same,
And who could blame them for it’s true,
When rainbow slides are sweetly made,
She’ll never leave you blue.

A hug a day is all she needs,
Or for warmth, a kiss or two,
She’ll make your day, just trust me,
For she’s given me a few.

Now all who know this special girl,
Will have shared the downtime sighs,
But deep down in those hearts of ours,
We simply love ‘blueyez’

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  • Candyknife gold member
    October 28

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    AWWWWWWWW

    this actually made me tear up a little, this is so sweet
    nothing less then she deserves absolutely great dedication so well penned its so easy to wirte about someone so great so many nice things just slide right off the mind shes a great woman, and i dont know why but i thank you too for this, and giving her a smile just as shes given so many others
    great write


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    October 28

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    Silent this was a great write and beautiful tribute to someone ou hold dear. I love the way you put things and this one is one of your best I would say as it came straight from the heart. Great work. Thank you for sharing this with us


  • blueyez
    October 28

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    I am so flattered and feel so special mikey... thank you sooooooo much i love you and I love you allllllllll! This is goin on my page!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 27

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    awww

    such a beautiful dedication sweetheart to a friend and im so sure she is gonna simply love it your magical quill doth softly flow with an ink so devine..you bring smiles, sometimes tears but always joy to the heart of your reader niaish na ehama na hesta for just simply being you for us all to love


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 27
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    aww what a lovely dedication


  • NyteShade
    October 27

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    Aww blue blue will absolutely love this! She really is one in a million and we luvvles her to death. A beautiful dedication to her Mike. brilliantly penned


  • Dmonik
    October 27

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    Well said Mike.
    Sara is one in a million, and has helped me out in the past too. She's a fiercly loyal friend with a lot to give, and if you're a friend, you're a friend for life with her.....
    This is a wonderful dedication to her, and I'm sure she'll be happy to see it.
    Bravo

    'D' (scott)

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