Another morning,
another wasted soul,
floating home out of control,
Blinking at the orenge sky, I wonder why?
Everyone is another shade of you, I can't deny.
Listening to our song are my cheeks wet?
Embracing myself as I light up a cigarette,
Thoughts of you linger, don't you know?
I die a little just thinking of you.
You wanted someone I could never be,
And it cuts so deep inside of me.
You were too weak to face your fears
You're only good at fighting back tears.
I hate you right now and you should know,
I have not blinked, so these tears won't show.
Its time to be a big girl and big girls don't cry,
So without a tear, here's my sweetest goodbye.
Goodbye..............
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sigh... it's over
but when will ( I ) get over it?
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so sad!!! 
this just pulled at my heart because i too have felt this before. specially the line "Everyone is another shade of you, I can't deny"...dammit i relate to that too much.
hope you feel happier soon hun
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I'm sorry you had to feel this unmerciful emotion too.
It's been like 3 months and all I do is drag myself around lost in thoughts and what if's a friend suggested I write myself dry and I'll feel better letting it out
Letting it go
So I hope she's right.
Still waiting...
I will be cheery again don't worry I bounce back with fire LOL -
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yea its one of the worst emotions to have to experience.
writing it out definitely does help. but it just takes time.
i lost a best friend who was like a sister and everything else inbetween like 2 years ago, she just took off....out of my life didnt look back.
its still a sore subject and i still have dreams about her and its upsetting.
guess its just part of life unfortunately!
but we all bounce back eventually
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It's rough to lose a best friend sorry bout that princess
Yup life is unfair but I guess we can make our own luck.
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I love your poetry girl -
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thank you im glad you're enjoying them!
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the emotions flowed through this very well. u wrote a beautiful piece
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Thanx for commenting ( :
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this is very painful, and i love the emotions of it, im sure people can relate. great flow, and keep writing. take care
Stephanie ♥
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Thanx stephanie for reading my poem it came from the heart
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I felt every bit of your pain and sadness and hate...the need to hold back the tears...preserve your dignity. Don't men just rip your heart out!
Though sad...a really touching write.
Take care,
Annie
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Thanx annie for your supportive comment
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