i was once a loving man...
whose heart was ripped away...
left now is a husk broken and deformed...
empty and hollow..
alone and dead...
the cold darkness surrounds me...
in the shadows i fall again...
let what seeks to destroy me do so...
let me fall in pain...
no one cares for a man like me...
a loser a fool pathetic...
my heart was hers...
she threw it away...
i am just trash...
toss me away...
you used me up...
took all that i had...
left me cold...
left me for dead...
what do you care...
you are happy now...
using people up...
then casting them down...
i am nothing and never was...
your heart is mine you said...
how quick that changes...
how quick im left for dead...
you said i was like a diamond...
you said you give anything for me...
you said that i was your world...
you said that i would always have you...
then you took off...
cast me away...
found your self another...
it barely took you days...
you loved me so much...
you was happy you were going to marry me...
then you turned around...
found your self another more shinier then me...
you said in my arms you were safe...
in my arms you were loved...
you said i took care of you...
you said you were happy...
you said i was always there for you...
you said you loved no one as much as you do me...
then you turned around...
then you cast me away...
now im dieing...
my soul has faded and decade...
my heart was on fire...
now it is ice cold...
you destroyed your lover...
you said you didn't mean to break my heart...
you said you needed time to be single...
time to focus on your studies...
how quick you tossed that away...
less then twelve days you had another...
you took a man who truly loved you...
you ripped him apart...
but at least your happy...
you got what you wanted...
you care nothing for me...
im wondering if you ever did...
so many times you slept in my arms...
so many times you whimpered if i moved away...
then you throw me away...
for some body new...
that's not love...
you used me for a time...
till you found some one new...
all i can say...
is if i die...
its all because of you...
just remember...
i actually loved you...
my death comes quick...
good bye...to the man you knew...
he is dead in a ditch...
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Hope you got every thing you wanted...cause you got there by destroying me...
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i am so sorry for the loss of the you loved. i can so very much relate to everything you said in this poem. the same things were said to me and he still found another. i loved him so deeply and it hurts i know!! i feel your pain more than you know!! i know its hard,but don't give up. some nice,kind and gentle caring lady will come your way and will love you back as much as you would her!! best of luck to you!!
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I'm sorry for your loss. I like your work though. I hope things work out for you.
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damn that sucks, really great write though. it reminded me of a time long ago when something like this happen to me, though i didn't have the words to express what i felt.sorry that this happened to you.
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I wish nothing like this ever happened to you. you are a great person and you dont deserve anything like this. the girls that do stuff like this to you are stupid and immature. you are a gem of this age and decade. You deserve to find a gem that is like you so you can feel the love that you show others
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