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Trails Overcome Tribulations

Another tear falls in the dark of night,
suffering, losing the will to fight.
Beaten down, trampled on,heart breaking
life is a mess, there is no mistaking
Trials have now overcome tribulations,

Soul has lost it's illuminating light,
there is a cloak of despair encompassing
nothing attempted seems to be right.
Going through the motions, barely functioning
Trials have now overcome tribulations.

Screaming yet no one hears the anguish
dammit....someone listen before it's too late.
Intervention needed, can't do it all alone,
yet there is nowhere to fall, empty arms.
Trials have now overcome tribulations.

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This is the first thing I have written in months so very raw. Just let the emotions carry the words.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 27

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    The emotions do carry the words, emotions that I know too well. You have voiced what so many have felt and live with, including me. Each of these trials and tribulations are ours personally, but others can definitely relate. My arms are always open to you, we may ride the tides of similar emotions, but together is better than alone.

    Jeannie