Giggling soul ,
deep heart.
Bubbly smile,
Joyous mother.
Intense pride.
Leathered hide.
Living brother,
adoring child.
Fairly smart,
glorious whole.
Author notes
Prompt " 10 words to describe yourself preceded by an adjective, not to be repeated . this makes up 20 words . No more No Less"
A contest entry
- 20 words by findingurself.less.
700 points, ended October 31, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmm... Could do without the punctuation.... Pride is a dangerous thing.... LOVE it! Thanks for entering.
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lol thank you I wasn't sure of the punctuation, I'm glad you did enjoy a peek at me .
Yes , pride is dangerous. I have intense pride, yet in moderation .
Thank you
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oh such an optimistic, upbeat poem : )
I like the last line a lot, it says that you feel good about yourself being the way you are
wonderfully written and good luck in the contest!
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I do try to be as , and more upbeat than my piece. Thank you for the comment . It means alot to hear from others about my writing.
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I really got a feel of your inside...I liked that...we as people put way to much focus on external beauty...this was wonderfully descriptive. Best of wishes in the contest. ~gypsy~
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I could only hope I was able to send in words who I am . Thank you for the contest idea .
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