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the melancholy of 4 a.m.






it complicates matters that he won’t stay dead
that he doesn’t parish or fade
doesn’t decay with slow ferocity
months ago are only days ago
hours ago
seconds ago
reminiscent thoughts turn my stomach sour
and they sink in
rot




as peaceful strangers, we have blind eyes for one another
turn cheek and grin
pretend there is not a knife in my back
or a pit of iron in his heart
or a corpse between us.
















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I found this when I was cleaning my room today. I can't remember when I wrote it. A month or so ago probably.

This is not what I intended...

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  • Plastic Dreams
    November 12
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    reminiscent thoughts turn my stomach sour
    and they sink in
    rot

    love this. it brings the sinking feeling to a new low. lower than below. like small tremors in the hand filled with anger, resentment, or maybe tragedy happening.


  • sora.
    October 27
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    wonderful vocab.
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