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The Dogs Shall Eat Jezebel

Inside the walls of Jezreel
A beautiful sacrifice

The harlot will be fed to the beasts
The flea-ridden, raging mongrels

She will be welcomed by their rabid mouths

Her flesh torn to shreds
Her bones split in two

Her teeth gnashed against the rocks
As she screams out to god for mercy

But the whore must be punished

The whore
Must
Pay

For the sins of the men

The dogs shall eat Jezebel

Devour her inside the walls of Jezreel

The dogs shall eat Jezebel

They will feast upon her sin
They will leave nothing for the vultures

No rotting flesh for the maggots to crawl through

They will eat and drink of her body
Then leave the swine to gnaw on the bones

Author notes

Inspired by 1 Kings 21:23. Although, this is not how Jezebel was murdered, the words "the dogs shall eat Jezebel" really stuck with me... and this is what came of it.

And when I say "vultures", "maggots" and "swine", I'm not necessarily talking about the creatures themselves...

For more information on Jezebel, read the Wiki page about her: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jezebel_%28Bible%29 I think that "Non-religious modern interpretations" will really help explain this thing...

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  • kenny-streetcrazy
    November 18
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    You know what I think of this materpiece. It's wow. I love reading your writing.

  • mcfreeman
    November 10
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    great subject.....

    there is much more to this....

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 28
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    Wow....

    ...... Another stunning write. Hmmmm what does this bring to mind with me. My first fiancee was much like the Jezebel in this poem, And should be punished for all of eternity. I am amazed every ti me I read you work. Spank you very much.... um .... er Thank you very much!


    • Alien She
      October 29
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      Not exactly where I was going with this, but thank you for the comment & applause

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