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Eventide (The Hunter)

The Hunter followed the blood trail
Eventide
Prayers honor the Hale

Dappled Sun in motion
The Maidens Morn
The exhausted song of prey

The Hunter let Her hair go
The green sea of Noon
Into His eyes She stared

Bright sunshine on Gunmetal
Brilliant copper sundown
The lonely pistol speaks

The Hunter followed the blood trail
Eventide
Prayers honor Him still

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  • Theasp
    October 27
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    Soul of a Hit Man you have

    I love the reference to September Morn one of my favorite paintings. But why did he kill himself?


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 27
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    nicely done.