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Atop The Pile

Stranded stagnating junk
Surrounded
Long-suffering men
Reaching for junk souls

Distrustful eyes
Furtive
A fellow fall from grace
Mirrored in sad eyes

The man atop the pile
Smirking
Looking on multitudes
Enjoying the joke

Cold-Running Humanity
Forward
Climbing the junkpike
Salt or Pepper?

Laughing from the apex
Fire!
Aromas of Viscera
Are strangely overrated

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  • Perennial Plague
    October 27

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    You neglected one rule:
    Strike me with brevity, give me lines of less than twenty.
    There are 23 lines in your entry. Consider to edit.
    I'll be back.