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this year



Last year
our maples shed their yellow leaves
within an
hour or two,
in a
single "shower"
on November 3rd.
We watched
amazed.
This year
a more
traditional strip;
slower
carpeting,
redder leaves.


- Earl Morrow



Author notes

My grandfather wrote this in a letter he sent recently. It was just one short paragraph among many, but he writes in a way that entangles. I loved it, so I posted it here. And if you don't like it, keep your small-mindedness to yourselves.

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  • miss.misery
    October 26

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    "today, my neighbour had a birthday party which included a pinata. i know this because i could hear them screaming from next door, "DIE YOU GREEDY UNICORN!" and "MAKE HIM BLEED CANDY!" my neighbour turned 72 today."

    your grandfather seems pretty cool, but i still enjoy your mother the most.
    i have a type writer. maybe we could get together and type-write beautiful things.


    • narcissist
      October 27
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      i'll be sure to bring it up next time I talk to him lol

      • miss.misery
        October 27
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        oh, i meant you and i. the only family member of yours that i have interest in is your dear mother~
        also, check out www.bash.org
        it's pretty much as good as mylifeisaverage.


  • solarjinx
    October 26

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    damn, poetry runs deep amongst your people. I think I'm the only one in my tribe who writes, which is why nobody gets me at family reunions. FML

    I especially enjoyed this.

    • narcissist
      October 26
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      It's mostly just my grandpa who writes. He has the mind - and appearence- of some elderly philosphy/literature professor but he's never done anything with it.

      Plus, he actually uses a typewriter. Major cool points.

      You read FML? or was that your own addition? www.mylifeisaverage.com


      • solarjinx
        October 26
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        I know about FML and have read some, but that was my own.

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