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Substitution

you're such a tease.
you kiss my neck, knowing
that that soft touch on my sensitive skin
inflames my desire.

my fingers float.

you're such a man.
you press that rock-hard
thickness tight against my lush
assets, and i feel so feminine and small.

i arch my back in pleasure.

and then you walk out
the door, leaving my panties
soaked through and musky,
the heady scent of what i want and can't have.

sighs echo in my empty room.

so i slip inside my bedroom,
open the bottom drawer on the left side,
and withdraw the toy that makes me
moan your name.

why isn't this you?

lying back on my bed,
i slide my lips around the pretty
purple shaft, closing my eyes
and imagining the feel of your hands in my hair.

i swallow my toy dreaming of your cock.

then, slick with saliva, it drifts
across the swell of my sweet curves,
and the soft plane of my belly,
to rest upon Venus' mound.

my eyelids twitch.

spreading those long legs
you stroked so easily,
i slip my plastic pleasure deep
where your stiffness would fit so well.

i can't help but groan your name and cum.

Author notes

Mmmmmm wow. I think I need to act this one out now, lol. Hope you enjoy!

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 29

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    Very Hot and Steamy

    wheeeeeeeewwwwwwwww
    Daymn that was good..I hope you had fun as well
    You managed to keep the write tasteful
    and really pour on the sensuality
    You place the reader with you..very impressive

    Laughed out loud at this
    "why isn't this you?"

    I guess your purple friend
    takes care of everything that he can't
    We (us men) love hearing our names getting cried out
    that is Fken erotic as hell

    This was a delightful please worthy of needing a cold
    I shall have to check you out

    ..er..check out your writes [slaps self]

    Thank you for your entry, this is awesome
    Wish you the best of luck in the contest
    David

  • Bruce silver member
    October 28

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    An excellent, excellent write! Wow, you write like a pro . . .uh, I meant that in a good way! What makes this so wonderful is that it flows very natural and logically, and you employ gorgeous description. I can't wait to read more of your work!


  • zee91190
    October 27

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    That was a pretty steamy write. Well done


  • Dead Roses
    October 27

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    LMAO

    Oh what a good idea that sounds lyk... BRB (j/k), I love the write very nice! hope to read more oh ur work and see just where it can take me, try to get me in the mood for my own story writing lol! so urs is purple huh?


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 26

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    AHEM..

    UHM..excuse me??? this is not good for my heart you know!
    you need to warn folks they about to step into FIRE when it's been set up to burn them with.. whew.. somehow i got thru and it was very HARD to do..l.o.l.

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