Blood, sweat, and tears
It's been a long time
I lost track between the days, months, and years
Sadly, it's come true, I fear
I've come to the conclusion
That this bitterness and seclusion
Has taken over my life
I thought I could win
But I'm not coming out on top in this fight...
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Another old one, but frankly I really like this one 
What did you think
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love sux! but its sumtimes worth it. its better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.!.
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hehe actually I love the lyrics from Boys Like Girls...who said it was better to have loved, I wish I never loved at all
or something on those lines hehe
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I like this, it's emotional but not over dramatic or sentimental.
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I enjoyed it. I really liked it. It was awesomeish to read (yes I know awesomeish isn't really a word but I don't care) Love and Peace!
-Jess
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I like this poem, the beauty of it is that its a short poem but it still has its essence and it has meaning. It is filled with so much emotion.
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awsome!
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blood, sweat, and tears...
:hugs:
Now I have no more to say
Stop posting them for the night! lol
<333
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