In a perfect world ~
No hate there you would ever
see .We'd all live in harmony .
There would be no prejudice ,
intolerance or bigotry ...
In a perfect world ~
There would be no hunger or
despair . Always food for all to
share . Happy smiles on faces
of children everywhere .
In a perfect world ~
There would be no "greed" to feed
the warmongers need for victory .
There would no more wasted lives .
No more blood shed needlessly .
One day this may become reality .
A perfect world then this would be .
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Author notes
Contest : Prompt - In a perfect world ....
pic from photo bucket
A contest entry
- Prompt For You #3 by Jeremy0826.
1900 points, ended November 24, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Profoundly Inspirational!!
I love your thinking. What if the world could be perfect?!!? Good work, Easy!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with all of us!! 
Peace,
Cyn
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Thank you Cyn !! Glad you stopped by tonight !
You bring a smile to my day each time you visit ..
Great hearing from you !
Best always & hugs* friend Easy
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I love the thought that you put into this and the picture is abosutely beautiful. If we could hold the world in our hands like that. I love the colors and imagery in this. Lovely work here and I appreciate your entry in my contest. Good luck to you and thanks for sharing it with me!
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Thank you for your kind words Jeremy !
Y'all have a great weekend !!
Best regards , friend Easy
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If there were only such a thing as a perfect world but you wrote very nicely about one if it existed. I guess sometimes our world is what we make it. Thank you for letting me read your work.
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Good morning Brook !! Nice hearing
from you , thank you for your
lovely comment ! Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Once again you've done a brilliant job! I love the theme and the hope that can be sensed in each line. I truly wanna believe in this.
Well done!
Nela
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Aww thank you Nela !! A lovely comment , I
would like to see this happen in my lifetime ..
I appreciate your visits , glad you stopped by
today !! Take care ,
Best always & hugs , Easy
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In a perfect world...
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Yeaa !! Thank you for the clappy's Marcy !
Y'all have a great day !!
Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy
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This is so very true, I believe that our world should spend more money trying to give shelters, food, education and medical care to those who need it instead of wasting it on weapons and war... I mean what does that tell us about our government's priorities!?!
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Hi Jessie !! Thank you for visiting today
and for your wonderful comment ! And
I agree !! That would be something I
would love to see ...
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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In a perfect world ~ we could only dream for at peace is the thing i see.. but one day in heaven we will see all this beauty transpired around all we breath.. I love the way you pen for this is stunning and so true .. Hugs always Angel♥♥
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Hi Angel ! Your comments always
make it seem like a perfect world !
Hey thank you for stopping by tonight !
You take care ...
Best always & hugs , Friend Easy -
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and many smiles for you my dear soul♥♥
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Amen!
An awesome poem that gets right
at the heart of love, "In A Perfect World."
Nicely done
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Hi Darell !! Thank you my friend I
appreciate your kind words !
Nice of you to stop by ! Take care ,
Best regards - Easy
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This was great!!
You can really get someone to see your thoughts, and make a new world one person at a time that reads!!!!! Well written!
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Thank you Tanya ! One day it may become
a perfect world , I hope so ! And thanks
for the smile you brought today !
Big hugs - Friend Easy
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Ahhh but you are talking about Heaven Easy and we have to journey past the rainbow to reach that
This is a lovely dream of a poem Easy filled with 'if only's'
Perhaps if we weren't human??
Cherry xxx
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Cherry , Good morning ! Nice hearing
from you today ! Yeah your right , the
world may not be perfect like Heaven
but it would be nice to have a bit of
Heaven here , on earth . It could happen .
Thank you for your lovely comment !!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy -
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Ez Writer
We can live in hope Easy and I would love to see it happen 
Have a lovely day, it is just drifting into evening here in the UK have to think about tea time now having a nice hunky chef to do it for me would bring us a little closer to the perfect world for me 
giggles
Cherry xxx
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When will we learn that hatred, jealously, anger, don't work; that revenge and holding grudges don't get any of us what we want--love, happiness, peace of mind. When will we ever learn?????
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Ahh you are sooo right but one day
hopefully , this may - just come to be !
Hey you have a wonderful day !!
Thank you for stopping by & for
your lovely comment !!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Ah yes the perfect world that He created, well Adam and Eve messed that up. Longing for the same things to occur in the winds of change. Excellent. Blessings.
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Good morning Denise !! Great hearing
from you ! Be nice to this change in
this lifetime .. Hey you have a nice
day Sis !!Glad you stopped by !!
Best wishes & hugs , Bro Easy
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while the world falls short of perfect so often, there are glimmers of perfection and inspiration such as in these lines which can motivate action in the world's corner we occupy and those we see to reach - a kind act, a shared meal, a loving word spoken, a budding hero encouraged..... and in so many small ways big things happen.
thanks for sharing your thoughts here. well done.
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Thank you for your visit today Rick !
I appreciate your input and thoughts
on this poem and it's subject !
Great hearing from ya ...
Best regards , Friend Easy
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Too bad the world is far from perfect!!
This is great.
Good luck in the contest
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Hi Sarah !! Glad you stopped by tonight !
Thank you for your kind words , you
always bring a smile when you visit !
Take care ,
Best regards & hugs , Friend Easy
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Absolutely wonderful. A hint of rhyme which I like. Very powerful piece, you did quite well with this. Best of luck in the contest.
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Hi Deborah !! Nice hearing from you tonight !
Thank you for stopping by , and for your
lovely comment ! Take care ,
Best always & hugs , Friend Easy
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want a wonderful thought... a perfect world with all the aboved mentioned things you have written a winner in my book . Best of luck in the contest\
Sean
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Well thank you very much Sean !!
What a perfect world it is to have a
friend like you ! I appreciate your
kind words , take care ,
Best regards , Easy
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