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Forever's End

Verse #1

Hey, where’s that faded line? The line you crossed this time
‘Cause I’m bleedin’ spite for you, oh, malice soaking through

Put down your power, rid your fame,
Your innocence is jaded now, but Lady Luck has served you all the same,
Oh, all the same

Betrayed; my reliance misapplied,
Pray; for the river of mercy’s dried
Rain; it has fallen, shall so you,
Oh, now these floods will run you through


Chorus

You take my being to befriend, but all my trust is gone and spent,
You thought you’d stand over me forever; well this is where forever ends


Verse #2

Hey, where’s the King’s crown now? It’s disappeared somehow,
This yearning of revenge I hear so loud

Put down your power, rid your fame,
Your innocence is jaded now, but Lady Luck has served you all the same,
Oh, all the same

Cold; your warmness turned askew,
Unfold; let this malice descend on you
Control; time passes and tables turn,
Told that your time has come, and you need not learn?
No, never learn


Chorus

You take my being to befriend, but all my trust is gone and spent,
You thought you’d stand over me forever; well this is where forever ends
Through all the truths and all the lies, I’m far too deaf to hear your cries,
You thought you’d stand over me forever; well this is where my conscience dies


Outtro

I see, you’re running for your life,
Cut through you like a knife; see my reflection in your eyes,
They glisten oh so bright, such a shame, they must be closed tonight

Author notes

Speaks for itself, more of a malicious feel compared to my usual stuff, commentt

Genre: Metal

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  • Thunder Child
    November 19
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    wow! this is just fantastic if there was music to it, it would be even better. the music industry needs more writers like you most songs today are just weird but this is really good!!!


  • An.abrupt.ending
    November 13
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    Excellent lyrics. I'd like to hear the music that accompanies them.

  • jackflashjess
    November 2

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    Some emotive imagery, really adds to the feel of your lyrics, it has a nice flow very musical. Well done!