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Her tender cheeks
and twinkle toes,
will soon replace my old teddy.
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Author notes
10 - 86 words
---I went with 10 words
Quickie Prompt:
http://lovers-nocturne.deviantart.com/art/I-miss-my-childhood-141536806
A contest entry
- quickie♥ by Kathraina.
525 points, ended October 28, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What comes to mind...?
Comments
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Ah yes...less can be more.
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wonderful
Very creative and so well writtne. What a great write. Congrats on the honorable mention
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Awe...I'm gonna cry...This is so sweet.
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Thanks!
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sometimes i really believe that less is more, and you proved it right here! brilliant take on the prompt
bravo and thank you for entering
♥ kate -
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Hey Thanks for an HM!
Amber
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Wow, a short but meaningful thought here. This is something that I think we all have thought in our days. Lovely work here and good luck to you with this one. Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
So much said in such few words. Very good. Wonderful and pure imagination.
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OOOOOOHHHHH now I get it... I had to read it a few times, but I see... how sweet. Sorry not a mommy yet! hmmm but I cant see a child ever replacing my teddy... had him way to long now (he is over 30..SHHH! Lol) very nice never thought I would see something so short and sweet. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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ohhh..i like it it's so cute! i think of a baby when i read it...very nice take on the pic
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this is adorable!!!!!!!!! <33
i usually never say that about a poem;
so great work! the short amount of words put an astounding author's tone up for the reader's emotions to grasp
terrific! i hope this wins gold 
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well done
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