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every other girl that lives

Because of wildflowers-

she couldn't crossover,
all of them looked so beautiful.

 

She mumbled knowing,

nothing lasts forever-
not wanting to go back,

she went over them.

 

(Her dad destroyed all evidence)

 

Each spring she remembers,
and does anything to abolish the pain.

 

 

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prompt - http://lovers-nocturne.deviantart.com/art/I-miss-my-childhood-141536806

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  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 29
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    nicely done hun
    congrats on the well deserved gold

    Tasha


  • Kathraina silver member
    October 28

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    wow, this is dark and beautiful. the silent emotions here resound off every line. very intriguing take on the prompt!

    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 26

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    Wow, very nicely done as always my friend! All the best to you with this entry and thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • OnceUponAMind
    October 26

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    I really love the first stanza! The bit about the wildflowers being so beautiful... Love that Good luck!


  • Not-The-Sun gold member
    October 26

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    oh the last lines say so much; so relatable, too. excellent, creative work with the prompt; your simplicity here is powerful and astounding! good luck : )


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 26
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    nicely done for the prompt.

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