Waves
Flowing
Fluidly
Gently, lightly
Before it changes
to a conversation
That weeps with sweetness
Unbearably
Heartbreaking
Throbbing
Ache
Peace
Washes
Over me
Oh tender love
Dance with me, dance now
Wallow in its glory
For now its end nears
I turn away
Hesitant
To go
On
Wards
But I must
I hold life’s hand
Horizons call me
Melancholic voices
Rising into air
Telling me
To let
Go
“Soon”
I plead
But knowing
And finally
Understanding Life
as a long, tiring road
peace serenades me
“accept this fate
succumb now
Let go
Come’
Life’s
Journey
Continues
I have no choice
But to follow suit
Sighing, I accept Life.
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very nice reading this with the gentle music in the background made it all come to life well done
Cyber Artist
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i really like the work you have done here, it is very raw and hit the soul with in me fantastic.
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Rich and raw writing, I like the use of dialogue to help lead the story of the piece. Really hypnotic musical accompaniment ebbs and flows with the graphic shape of the poem. The final lines are beautiful.
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omg
this poem is deep. i feel like the part of my life that i didn't understand, I now do thanks for showing me that. great poem
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the poem touched my heart my grandad died when i was 8 and i miss him so much i sometime have good old cry about it
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this a very touching poem and i will try to rember it forever
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Dani
This is very incredible..unique to you and awesome as well..I see that Ellen loves this as I knew she would..this may be may of you best hun
Write on my dear for your pen is ablaze right now
Love..
David 
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I love it... because thats the point I'm at in my life. And the music, is making me cry... like really. Cause I'm in a lot of pain. But I really wish I could just accept this is how it's going to be.
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OMG I love you Dani thankkk youuuuu soooo muucchhhh for doing this
I really wanted to put it up heheh 
Can't thank you enough
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you my gorgeous friend are most welcome!
it took some time, But i did it
Coz I'm awesome!
Any other videos you want me to put up, lemme know, put the tags and description on the vid, and I'll be glad to add it up
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