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I'm Always With You

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From The Voice And Heart Of A Soldier

I am sitting here writing this poignant letter
You see there is a chance I may lose my life
To all my  amazing family and loved ones
I am so honoured to have you all in my life

Dad please know you are one great father
You always taught me how to be a man
I am immensely proud to be your son
You are not just my dad but my best man

Mum I am so lucky to have you as a mother
You always taught me right from wrong
I would not change a thing about you
You are one reason why I stay strong

My darling beautiful  angel in this world
My heart,soul  my loving wife I love you
I remember our  unique wedding day and
I feel the luckiest man you make me true

My beautiful special son and daughter
I am so proud and happy to be your dad
I remember the day you were born so well
My precious little lass and  my little lad

If you ever read this then I will be gone
But please know I'm Always With You
I want you to be happy and live life
I will always be watching over you






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ScottishPrincess-Hazel

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 26
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    strong.


  • adolescente
    November 25
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    lovely rhyme, although i would watch the flow and meter in some parts.

    loving this poem.

    thanks for entering!


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 16

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    I can see where a soldier might write this. Very sad and emotional. I can feel your dedication and support to our troops. Thank you. Good poem.


    • ScottishPrincess silver member
      November 17
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      Such an complete honour to write this ...Those soldiers have a special place within me...Hazel


  • savemysoul
    November 8
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    wow, very sad. and i liked your emotion. you did a great job with this. thanks for entering and good luck.

    -- jordan.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 1

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    So glad to be reading this poem as our Remembrance Day comes on Nov.11th here in Canada.Even though the picture is of an American soldier, I feel the same about all serving their country for the cause of peace..This is a lovely write in rhyme and flow, Hazel.. You are young with a big heart...Keep your pen in the ink well... Rosemary

    • ScottishPrincess silver member
      November 1
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      I am honoured you commented on this...Our Rememberance Day comes on Nov.11th here too in UK...I just from within...Hazel


  • OnlyOneLifeToLive
    October 28
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    Great poem! Sad, but great! Thanks so much for entering my contest!

    • ScottishPrincess silver member
      October 28
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      Such an honour to write this and enter your contest...Much love and respect to you and your fellow comrades...God bless...Hazel


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 26
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    Very touching! This could be a real letter from a soldier at war. You did a fine job of this one Hazel! Pam

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