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Faded Blue Jeans

Just me...

slipping out of denim desires

teasing...

your mouth moist

hips hug...

low slung stonewashed pleasures

until we fade...

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  • Bruce silver member
    1 day ago
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    Hmmm . . .fading is OK if done with style. Remarkably efficient and elegant use of 20 words! You are talented indeed!


    • onesugar gold member
      1 day ago
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      Always in style Bruce Thank you for you fab comment and compliment, both greatly valued. ~sugar~

  • midnightblue1272
    October 27

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    Well, well.

    Very interesting take on blue jeans. This was blue jeans you were talking about, right sis? Either way, this had a seductive tone to it. Good one.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 27

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    Awesome
    I have just found out by one of my previous writes that denim is not known in the USA ...
    This really teases to excitment and you always pen sensual so beautifully hun

    Good luck

    Julie x


  • jessica rabbit.
    October 26

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    oomph. this was provocative.

    thanks for the entry.

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