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I let you inside

You got to me
The way no one else could
I let you see me
Like no other should

As my mind told me no
My heart said it was ok
I knew you loved me
Or so you say

But as i handed my heart to you
You took in hand
As i smiled inside
Your mind had a devious plan

You stole my heart
Right from my chest
And broke in in two
And put me through something no one could guess

And now deep in my mind
There's a voice unkind
My poor broken heart
All becasuse i let you inside

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  • brokenheartedgirl21
    November 13
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    this is exactly what happened to me i know how you feel


  • Punkrocker1991
    October 30

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    this is a great poem. i know how you feel. why is that guys do that? i guess it doesn' matter. you wrote a antastic poem. i really loved it.