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a Winter Wonderland

It was a bitter cold day
I acted brave Holly said
going out in the snow storm
to save baby chicks
Everything is white
and I am freezeing
I got the birds settled in
for the night
On awakening
to the bright sun light
It was very beautiful out side
in the winter wonderland
I was pretty agreeable
when Holly was up to something
then we went sledding
It was very cool
and breezy sliding down the bumpy hills
Holly ran into a tree
and we found out later
she has a broken knee

Author notes

Darlene Long
bitter brave bright beautiful agreeable breezy bumy broken

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 6

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    Wow so vivid, only it ends horrible! Still superbly written!


  • GotLilt
    November 3

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    What a beautiful scene, except for the broken knee. Thanks for entering it.