Rachel

Running circles through my mind
Always in my heart
Cleverly you've made yourself a place
Heaven is in your embrace
Every waking moment my thoughts
Love, are forever with you there

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A contest entry

her name. by ZachP. 650 points, ended November 9, 17 entries
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ZachP
November 9
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So very hearttouching <3
I love this. Well done.
~Zach~

songstress80
October 27
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such a lovely acrostic. good luck in the contest.

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