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Tristen.

You know i like you but you dont seem to care.
I have told you and your best friend,
but you still dont care.
When you hug me it feels so right but wrong.
You have a girlfriend but,
I cant restist.
You tell me you love me but is it just play?
What do i do???

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  • Jory Anderson
    October 28

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    Very short but sweet this is a great poem...it has good flow..and yoou can always count on your gut feeling when it comes to a situation if it feels wrong talk to him about it if he has a girlfreind then it probably is wrong but good luck and sorry about your confusion


    • Eveybodys-FOOL
      October 28
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      thx i actually showed him this and it turns out he does feel the same way. yay!!!!


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    October 28

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    great poem

    sometimes only time can tell other times its up to him to choose what is right or wrong, it gets confussing but sometimes just being there will lead him into loving you more


    • Eveybodys-FOOL
      October 28
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      thx i actually showed him this and it turns out he does feel the same way. yay!!!!


  • Hija of the King
    October 27
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    ive been through this. unfortunately my advice is make him choose b/w you or his girlfriend.


  • Reanna Eryn
    October 26

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    Some people don't care, no matter what you tell them. You may love them with all you have and more, but they can laugh at you when you're at your lowest. You should find someone else, someone better. (Yes, there is someone better.) Breathe and move along.


  • withouthim
    October 26
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    Great

    I really like this its good and so true


  • Dark King
    October 26
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    I cant really tell you what to do. sounds like its all just a big confusing mess

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