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Denim

Rugged used cotton
Quilted for our pleasure
Made just for comfort
To be worn and abused
Until the very end

A contest entry

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  • glow-worm
    November 5
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    nice.


  • jessica rabbit.
    October 26

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    I like the feeling at the very end of this. We all love our worn-in denim.

    thanks for entering.