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Lickety Split.(Rondelet)

Lickety split
What you're doing is surprising
Lickety split
But I do not mind it, not one bit
I'm getting hot, passion's rising
Wonder what next you're devising
Lickety split.

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  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 27

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    Lickety split
    your penning is quite amazing
    Lickety split
    great imagery, and that's not it
    your penning is very funny
    all the laughter hurts my tummy
    Lickety split

    Excellent take on a silly prompt
    True to form as well
    Wish you the best of luck..David