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I see her standing alone...
I want to be with her,
but im stranded behind a glass wall
and dont know what to do...
I see her tears,
I try to do something,
but she can't hear me,
Im drowning in my own words....
I see a beautiful soul...
I want to scream her name..
the walls disappears,
but yet i feel held back....
I cant say a word,
I want to get closer,
but she disappeared...
now ive found her....
but she doesn't know,
I whisper in her ear,
she turns and cant see a thing....
but im standing right there...
I want her to see me,
but dont no how...
I want to feel her touch,
but somehow feel ominous
I know she can hear me...
and you know who you are....
you just dont know....

.....that im the one you looking for

what do you think..and be honest.

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  • My friend Nithya loves it too! ;D Keep up the poems duudee! o.o
    Nithya: its sooo touching and loving....<3

  • *Clapz* o.o

    Niiceee!!! o: Loved it :] Second comment! Woo! xD


  • Creed Trees
    October 26

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    aw this is such a great poem. Yay I get to be the first to comment. That means that soon my comment will be burried away on another page but hey I don't care because I was the first to comment on this poem! This poem is awesome. It kind of reminds me of a poem that I wrote a long time ago. Familiar in a way but not really. Anways yea I loved it.