Your voice causes quivering
Deep within my being
Succulent is comparative to your flavor
And your scent, drives mad eroticism within me
I ache to feel your touch
And your sweat
Drenched all over me
As your hands impress upon my skin
Your masculine strength
Chemistry
Beautiful lust
Painted on your lips
As I taste passion
Favoring you
Beyond all others
I see only you
I feel only you
I ache for only you
Only you exist in my heart
Replace me not
For I am yours
Here and now
Evermore
Author notes
sprung... good or bad it's a feeling I can not escape
Please tell me what you think
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-whistles quietly- wowsers Sara. vivid imagery of two people intertwined within the throes of pure absolute bliss and lust for only each other. all in all whoever is the lucky man in this poem. me thinks he should cherish what a lovely lady he has in you
David
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I like it, it's honest. It reads to me as horny, but not vulgar horny; more an emotional, beautiful desire to strengthen the relationship in question, via physical intimacy. I may be off, but that's how I interpret it, and I like it. It's beautiful, Sara!
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Aww, Sara
This is so sweet! It makes me think of Chase... and I'm guessing that it's a good thing if I'm gunna marry the guy, right? I love you! I miss you! 
Good poem, and I give your your prize turtle 
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Always,
Pirtemy
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in the famous words of Kool-Aid, "OHHHHH YEEEAAAHH!". this is hot and lovely and sultry. beautiful words express here. as alaways i am a fan of your number 1.
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hmmm I remember being there. Glad I am over it. TIME too much time got me over it
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-sings- Only you---, can make me feel this way. Only you...
Lovely write Blueblue. I didn't know you thought so much of me
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Ok now I have that song only you stuck in my head, ya...thanks
Nice write
Only you, can make... -drifts off cause i've forgotten the words- lol
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