We were talking on-line
I wanted some, and he wanted mine
We turned on video chat
He said he wanted my clothes off
I said only if he did the same
We exchanged a laugh and then got to it
I started off with something simple
Pole dancing
He loved my little act
But it wasn't good enough for him
He needed action
I said you first
He was in the shadows he wouldn't let me see his face
He did his thing
It wasn't enough to turn me on
So I did my thing a bit more strong
I pulled my breast up and did what he wanted
I sucked until my nipple was bright red
Then I got down on my knees
He was imploring "PLEASE"
I got my pussy to the camera
I was hitting the clit and I knew I was
I was moaning
He loved it
He showed me he was hard
I helped him out a bit
I got on my bed
Put my laptop down
Pulled out the toy
Played around a bit
Sucked the tip
Then without thinking
I slid it in
I couldn't help myself
I knew this was way better than what he could give me
He couldn't even show his face
I was dripping wet
I stained my sheets
But I kept going
I pulled it out and stuck it in my mouth
The warm liquid flowed
Then I looked in my dresser and got the largest one I had
I had never used it before
It was just so big
I slowly made my way down to my wet vagina
I shoved it in
Oh! Yes!
I had never been so satisfied
I had never had an orgasm quite like this before
I couldn't believe my own body could produce so much fluid
I was just getting done and about to get offline
When he screams "STOP!"
"Lick it all up"
I made a noise that didn't sound human
I didn't want to do it,
But I leaned over in doggy style
I did as he said
The warm juices flowed through my mouth
It was hard to believe that I was doing this for an on-line stranger
But then he said "thank you, I'm getting off"
I got a brief glimpse of his face
And he wasn't a stranger
He's my dad!
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Daymnnnn!! Lmao


This was very hot and steamyyyyy throughout
The erotic imagery is fantastic..you bring the reader right into your room / computer
..btw very creative piece using an "online chat and video cam" as part of this fine erotic adventure..naughty but so very nice
Whewwwwwww..it got really warm now..{I had to get a DRINK}
The expicit picture you painted..wetness and toys..
had me in severe need of a cold

However, the ending is indeed a classic as well
roflmao..what a Fken shocker



Brilliant sensual, erotic penning dear..
Bravo!

Wish you the best of luck..Thanks again
..David


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Haha! I'm glad you liked it!
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Oh my God that was so hot and then I read the ending and almost died laughing!!! That was awesome! Thanks so much for sharing this lol ^_^
-K

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Haha! Thanks! I'm so glad you read it!
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