Seen-
her in a dream
her face was lean
her smile was mean
she raised her glass high!
Tilted face, back to the sky
she swallowed hard
she had no guise.
Her look was lost
her drink was tossed
across the room.
I heard the boom
so I approaced...
and so I asked
really fast
"Would you like to dance?"
so she replied
"I dont get down"
We start to kiss
it makes no sense
the drinks come quick
the money spent-
we're gettin bent!
I lay her down
pool tables side...
we're making out
she starts to cry...
"I gotta go..."
so I reply
"Just take me home"
We're in her car
shes driving hard
she grabs my shit
i rub her clit
I'm thinkin back
to in the bar
that little tat
and so it said
"Punk Rawk Princess"
We're on the road
we're driving home
irradicly-
a calamity
in the making
is she just faking
what did i miss
how'd I get this-
"Punk Rawk Princess"?
this is a dream i had last night bout this punk chick i picked up at a social club/bar/pool hall she was weird but tell me what u think
Comments
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Clever wording and cool tale, but I don't care for the "shit, clit" lines. Sounds like some of the Blink 182 lines when they were being immature.
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ha ha yea it do sound like some blink shit dont it? oh well thts the emo/punk style i was goin for but thnx 4 the comment
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hahaha i love this one! that's a sweet dream you had. this poem flows very nicely, i like your hip hoppy style, it's cool.
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lol it was more like a punky beat i didnt mean for it to be hip hop but i can see how it could be thanx for the input tho lol
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