What do think of when you hear these words?
"Broken"
"Heart"
"Broken Hearted"
I think of those who have had their heart ripped from their beings.
I think of those who have had their emotions played with constantly.
I think of myself, where I no longer have a heart to give.
I'm one of those people.
I am one of The Broken Hearted
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J a z z l y n
not my est but i tired
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- heartbroken by vampireintherain.
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good job =D
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...no heart to give? is every act of kindness you give me bs? well thats ok, u bs very well =) heehee, ily jazzlyn =D
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i meant in the act of loving some else, someone I could spend the rest of my life with
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o0o0o...ok that makes sense...nah, maybe you feel like that now, but things change. Even though things could be better, the silver lining does exist =] besides you have enough time to recover your heart!
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it is pretty good, thanks for entering
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