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Oh God think about me!

Oh God  think about me
as I drift in awesome wonder,
think about me
as I rise as I plunder
Let me be, the vision of your dream
the smile of a sunset
in a pallet of color swimming upstream
just think, don't forget
that the flower within, lives a long
bright light within me
just think God
that this,is thanks to thee
I am your creation
as you think about me,
your breath, an affirmation,
Oh God think about me
think about me with love
so that I may live fully
in your thoughts thereof
Oh God think about me!










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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 31

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    So strongly you have voiced the words ..the intensity level is truely very high and very impressive as well..love the matter and the message of it..well done...


  • raggyann
    October 27

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    i feel like this sometimes too
    this is a well written poem
    good luck in the contest