i sit here and i cry alone...
wishing i was dead...
wishing i could look at you..
and speak all those words unsaid...
beacuse i feel so alone..
i sit here and cry...
because i feel so alone...
tonight i will probably die...
because no one cares about me
or about the life i live...
i will put that blade to my wrist...
so no more pain i will forgive...
i know that doing this isn't right...
but i feel i have no choice...
because everyone ignores me...
i feel i have no voice...
so i will stop wasting
everybody's time...
leave the earth sad and alone..
the stairway i will now climb...
A contest entry
- Loneliness by Anguas-Confusion.
400 points, ended October 31, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yeah.... i am depressed...
Comments
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wow this is great
love it
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wow this is very good i love it
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a very good write although if you could put the prompt in the AN I would be very grateful. You've penned a lot of hurt and angst here, I hope you're ok. best of luck in my contest, thank you for entering xx
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this is amazing i love the pain and emotion that you put into this work of art rite here nice job i love your work
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thanks
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dont revise... and i agree...yesterday i had to get stiches... yes i tried i dont know when i have to go to the hospital but i will... this is 81... thats really sad i love your poem thought but if i'm not on for awile its becuase i'm locked up not dead
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i am really sorry to hear that and best of luck in the hospital... let me know when u get out...:/
stay strong...
liz <3
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this is a really good poem
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thanks
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