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Perfect Day

How to describe a perfect day
The bigots dying as they pray
Or screaming and terror all around
Bodies fall and hit the ground

The preacher man says it’s time to stand
The congregations rises holding hands
Can’t you see the death they bring
Hate that’s hidden as they sing

The perfect day I wish to see
The acceptance that I know can’t be
People no longer begging please
Hate won’t bring them to their knees

The President finally signs a bill
That makes it illegal for them to kill
Their hateful crimes no longer allowed
Second-class citizens stand tall and proud

A perfect day is not yet here
People still filled with too much fear
In our lives terror takes its toll
Hate and fear are in control

I know that they don’t understand
Yet here I stand with visions grand
The preacher will say very soon
I now pronounce you groom and groom

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  • beautiful lady
    October 27

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    i loved it and though u think it will never happen life may surprise u but the only thing u can do is love ur partner with everything u are rather they r male or female dn't let others arrogant opinions hold u back

    lily

  • beautiful lady
    October 27
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    Beautiful lady aka lily


  • novacaine.
    October 27

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    this is so amazing.
    i really love it.
    maybe it will happen soon?
    i doubt it.
    but we can dream, right?


  • unheard-whispers
    October 27
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    omg!!!! i love it so much. its a fantastic write


  • Jordan Martin
    October 26

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    how beautiful.. that made me cry it was incredibly irrefutable to now n i loved it


  • Sea-Shell
    October 26
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    Love it!

    I love the topic and the flow is brillant


  • lost-angel
    October 26

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    thats great, love the topic bril flow, great write

  • thats amazing


  • sexyremedy
    October 26

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    Beautiful

    i rilly like the flow of it n how it rhymes.


  • Wytch Leygh
    October 26

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    <3

    I love it. I'm so happy that Obama passed that bill. Now my girlfriend's attackers are gonna get what they deserve.

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