A little girl dressed in a red
cloak walks down the path
through the woods to
grandmothers house.
She carries a basket that
is suppose to have food
for her dear sweet grandmother
but instead it doesn't.
Inside this basket is a small ax
that she carries with her
every where she goes
and the wolf, Ha the wolf.
The wolf isn't the one that kills
her grandmother. Oh no!
Its little red riding hood herself
with the small ax she carries with her.
Little red riding hood knocks on her
grandmother's door three times
and then walks in as she sets down
her basket and opens it up.
Standing in the kitchen is her grandmother
staring in horror as her grandaughter pulls
the ax out of the basket and the wolf comes up
behind the grandmother and holds her tight.
With one quick swing little red riding hood
takes her grandmother's head clean off,
so now the walls are covered with blood.
That poor poor woman.
But her grandmother wasn't her first kill
it was her mother whom she killed just a
few hours earlier before she left to head to
her grandma's home.
But its the wolf who has helped her for so long
that should fear for his life because
its going to be his head next that will be planted
on the wall in her house one day.
But little red riding hood will die soon enough
for one day someone will come back and haunt her
and she will either die a horrible death or perhaps
go to a padded room to be drugged by the nurses.
Author notes
8.Little Red Riding Hood
I got some of this based off of a movie i watched which was a bit amusing. A sadistic version of Little Red Riding Hood.
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This is decent. It's dark, with some gore and a good sadistic and twisted backbone to the whole idea. A good adaptation to red riding hood and an enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and luck to you.
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YES TO THE SADIST RED RIDING HOOD!!!!YAY!!!!!
I loved reading this piece girl, it made me smile big smiles
Love it! I hope to read more from you!
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GORE GORE AND MORE GORE GAH!!!!!! AWESOEM
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love the gore. i do remember seeing a movie like this. great poem. good luck.
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LOL. I remember a movie that they made of that. This was sick, twisted, dark, and bone chilling. This was very excellent, and I mean that from one dark mind to the next. I loved it.
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Oh wow.. this was amazingly gruesome =] hehe. I loved the imagry and how you took a old classic story and transformed into into some terrifyingly terrific! I loved this :] It was amazing. Im going to use that person's word donw there. =] It was just like he said. Bloody Brillant
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Bloody brilliant! I love how you've taken a beautiful fairy tale and made it into something horrific, yet extremely exciting, and a version i would choose any day to read A fairy tale for grown ups - and a nice shot of reality. Truly well done!
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Haha this was nicely written I think you did a good job on it. I can just see lLIttle Red Riding Hood doing this to her grandmother and mother. Question is why she did it. OH yeah this was good. Thank you for sharing
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