Like the sister I never had
You were my world (And ditto to you)
There wasn't a secret I wouldn't tell you
Nothing about me you didn't know
I couldn't have loved or laughed with you more
We were always there for each other
Even when my boyfriend thought we were muff diving!!!
Will never forget what you used to say
"Men and Music. Older the better"
God that cracked me up
I swear my ribs actually sobbed
When it knew how hard I laughed
When I was with you
But then you changed
What a secret keeping little bitch you have become
You just don't seem to care for me anymore
I never changed, just drove away
I am only in the third town away
Yes we didn't ring all the time
We both knew the score (new love!)
But why did that suddenly change you
You lost your spark, or maybe you mortgaged it
To your new, but so aged love
Hell age gaps don't bother me
I think I know that you are a swinger by now
You've shagged a girl, and her boy, so what?
Does that make you ashamed to see me
Or does that make you better than me?
Facebook....
What a silly joke, to here all my friends gasp
"Did you hear, Lucy is up the duff!"
How EVERYONE laughed when they heard the truth
From the horses mouth
Bar your friend!?
Private posts to you and your friend
Not stating the reason why
You were both so outraged!
Abuse from someone I hardly knew
How odd!
I think the bitch was you!!!
Your aged, weird, but all right guy
Jesus, he's friendlier than you now
I spent all night talking to him on "facebook"
A message popped up
From a friend?
No...you!
"Hi mate, you have been on for hours, who ya talking too?"
(yeah I thought, what a friend you are!)
"Your boyfriend, we have been talking for hours."
"Oh"
(Yeah I thought, doubt you will give me that time)
Months I spent almost begging for a call
A half hour coffee break
Fag at Wollies
The good old days
But no
You still ain't even called
Or emailed
Or text
Or knocked for me
Two years dude!!!
What the fuck?
And you know what
I might show you this poem one day
When you've pissed me off just one more time
But for now, it can just stay here
Let others, hundreds know how I feel about you
My oldest, and now, most hated friend
Why did you leave me?
I gave you no reason to hate me
To really tell the truth
I think you've turned into a right boring bitch!
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From the first stanza, I'm pretty sure I know where this is going...
I know people like that... people I used to know. People I did care about... It kind of affects the people you know now, doesn't it? Or the way you interact with them.
'Sobbing ribs', there's an interesting image...
That was a clever line...
But why did that suddenly change you
You lost your spark, or maybe you mortgaged it
To your new, but so aged love
Mortgaged love. I like it...
Like everything else in today's world, it can be sold.
I also liked how you switched around the circumstances reaction..
Does that make you ashamed to see me
Or does that make you better than me?
It's all about perspective.
I wonder, is this your perspective of what others think of you? Or do you have a friend like this?
It's all shite, isn't it?!
I loved how you said... I'll tell the world what I think of you, and then maybe...I'll tell you.
Typical female reaction, methinks.
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Typical female reaction, methinks.
couldn't help myself, i'm still very pissed off with her. yes, it is actually a real person, and everything is true down to the details. i made a scrapbook page of her and me together as best friends, and can't chuck it away because it is double backed. i will always have that page, but frankly, if i could chuck it away i would. she has become such a piece of work, i never would want to be her friend again anyway, even if she did contact me. such a shame!
thanks for the lovely comment xxx
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Oh yeah!!!!!!
Me likey dis poem very much!!!!!!
Excellent release, let the lead fly!
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You know what, I've known people like that, like one minute you're their best friend, or so they tell you. Then they leave town and you never hear from them again, so you track them down, try to reconnect but can never get there, plus it becames a drain when you've always got to make the first move. Then again when you do get them on the phone, they are too busy to talk, promiss they do to call you back but never do. Yes I know someone like that, and your poem reminds me of person in question. A well written rant poem, showing such anger to rattle anyone from sleep. Take care and thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
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You wrote this really well. You don't need a friend like that.
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To really tell the truth
I think you've turned into a right boring bitch!
I so fucking loved this! Its amazing!..... i can't believe the way she did you. That mustve hurt really bad, but ya know what? You got an amazing write from it!!! Great job!!! I loved it
Lillie
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AWESOME !!! and you should soooo show her... put it on her wall on FACEBOOK HAHAHA
I can't believe she has still made no attempt... meh! I know how this feels sometimes ya know... You always have meeee though Great write! I felt the ANger funnel throughout this and I think that you should change "ain't" -- just my advice xxxxx 
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