Dear Lord!
As I bow my head,
in reverence
Holding my hands,
praying that you
will think of me-
today
My sins I give to you
Oh Lord!
You whisper in my ear-
forgiven they are at present
My praying hands,
that bind me to you
Oh Lord!
Seek and you,
shall be forgiven
That is all one
has to do
For I can only,
worship you my Lord
Author notes
Oh God ! think about me..Just think...Unknown.
A contest entry
- Just think... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 9, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very elegant and classic sense of soulfully praying....
i liked this one very much...
Congrats on your silver...
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thank you for your comment on my poem! Glad you enjoyed it.
~Sie
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Worshiping is the only way to get forgiven..and this is it..the depth and the light in your words proves the honesty of the soul you have..well done..
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Thank you for the silver! This poem meant a lot for me to write. Glad you liked it!
~Sie
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this is very beautiful good luck in the contest
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A prayer that strips away pretention,
speaks firmly of your intent...
A perfect prayer, Sie,
M-C
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Heartfelt and sincere words that portray the prompt so well..I always enjoy your prayers penned...Every success in the contest, Miss M...
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Wonderful prayerful request.
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