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hunger

My soul enough in flames
Left to ashes
            It burns a hole so deep
It lives no tarries
            It just hungers
Just a touch of flesh
            To feed the flames
To fill the hole,
                          The void,
                                          The space
To take the hunger away.



Won’t you feed me?

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  • Sinner69
    October 26
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    longing

    i felt the loneliness here i get this way sometimes....deep and nice..


  • Insane killer Klown
    October 26
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    interesting set up i love the way you did the indents to continue a thought
    good luck and good writing