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A New Friend

Dear Wilda,
        Please read this through before saying I am not old enough to understand
the hurt you are feeling. It may have had longer to develop in your life than mine, but rest assured I can identify with your pain.
        My heart suffers for you today as I sit and think of yesterday when your teardrops were as diamonds falling from beautiful lavender eyes meant for smiling and glowing. If I can find a way to lessen your load of sadness I will gladly do so. Please don’t feel you are alone because I am here for you from this point on through life. I will be your rock in the storm-laden trials. I will relish the time to come when I will begin to see rainbows in your eyes once again from where the raining tears have dissipated.
        Feel like your burdens have been halved, for I will bear what I can for you. Know I am here and will take your hand in friendship and be a refuge in any storm that comes your way. No more will you have to feel alone for you have a friend. Reach out and take my hands. I swear it will lighten your load and your mood.
               
                                                                      In true friendship,
                                                                            Sharon

Author notes

11a Diamond Teardrops Fall
42a Rainbows in your eyes
4b Write to an old woman struggling with loneliness and depression

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  • Everlasting Ellen
    November 11

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    Wow this is wonderfully deep

    I love the way its not really a poem, yet it was wonderfully poetic. Lovely flow, and explores the notion of friendship well

    Well done and thank you for entering