The time is always now,
the world is always bright,
it's not just when but how,
the soul transcends to light.
Look back and tell me when,
perfection walked the earth,
Gods light will shine in men,
who know the spirits worth.
So has it been before,
and shall be once again,
we gain forevermore,
the lessons learnt through pain.
Yes lights have shone before,
so bright to blind our eyes,
one walked along the shore,
chose fishermen to rise.
So we must cast our nets,
and walk the narrow way,
forgive and pay our debts,
choose wisely what we say.
Then joy will fill our soul,
our lives a light will be,
the truth shall make us whole,
that walked in Galilee
A contest entry
- I Want To See Soul by Pisces rainbow.
1000 points, ended November 11, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Knowing and living the truth adds a certain radiance to someone. There is a certain sense which touches the soul in their presence. I think of how artists depict saintly people with either a white or golden glow of halos reflecting the acceptance of truth inside.
Reads like a dream David and is worthy of its own.
Best to you in the contest. 
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I am sure we sense more in people than we know, and are aware of their spiritual/mental states if we open ourselves up to our feelings. Even plants are known to have auras, have you heard of Kirilian photographs? Pictures taken of plant leaves showing an aura. How much greater than the Lillies are we, they neither sow nor reap etc,.
Thankyou Pixie for your thoughts
David
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I love this poem, the message of Jesus coming into the world as a light, from the gospel of john. I really like the rhyme, the story line. It’s well written too... the ending was great. So just keep writing great poems and ill keep reading...
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Thankyou, I am so impressed that you are impressed
Lovely to hear from you
David
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Your smooth, flowing tallent is shining here. Your message is clear. It' time now for all to wake and find joy. - Bonita
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Thankyou Bonita, I felt the need for my christian roots when I wrote this poem
David
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Amen to Kathy's response...You give truth and hope today, just when I needed it...To walk in the truth, live it and know the truth...as our Lord taught it and lived it and died providing the way...So well written, David...
sis *rose
Bravo! All the best in the contest!
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Thankyou Sis, so glad you liked it, not normally my style to focus so much on a christian message. But that is what came to me so I had to put it down.
All the best,
Love david
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the choices
they are apart of each moment
like a pebble we toss into the water, the ripples
each thought leads to words than to actions
forgiveness it is a powerful tool
it ushers in joy, it releases us
the time is indeed NOW!
very well done David
always impressed
always a pleasure
God Thank you my friend...
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Gosh Kathy, that was a quick response, I was just in the middle of polishing the rough edges there. Thankyou for reading and continuing to run such excellent contests
David
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