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Drag me up by my teeth.

Drag me up by my teeth,
press your foot into my chest,
punch the smile from my face,
strap me to the car & drive.

Bothered by a small thing?
Taken back by emotion?
Life giving up on you?
Are you giving up on life?

Match your life to another,
you'll see things clearly.

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