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My Thoughts sometime's Wander (revised)

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My thoughts sometimes wander

In places I cannot see

Through faith I vision

What my eternity shall be

I invision greener pastures

The canvas before me

Paints a brighter future

What God has in store for me

Tho my eyes see dimly

Through this mirrored glass

 Way beyond the shadows

Are things so deep and vast

My thought sometimes wanders

In places I cannot see

My spirit stay on course

Until one day, God I only see

Faith through many channels

Venture's upon a joyous end

My destiny is one 

In that moment I transcend

 My thoughts will nolonger wander

God has already planned

Time here shall one day expire

Where my eternity begins

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This one was a quickie Just came out so thought i take the oppertunity and challenge my doubts. I'll just wait and see where goes.Needs some work but I really feel I can do something with the poem Its my thoughts of the future ahead what it will be like in heaven I plan on looking in the book revelation I think that will give me a much better vision of heaven.Faith does look and see a brighter future beyond this world where a beautiful eternity begans.

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  • fiona8 silver member
    October 26

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    It is all about staying the course, isn't it. Your poems are inspiring and comforting. I like the canvas/painting a bright future. Good one.