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Visions of you and me
Possibly
Shed in a tear
Like broken glass
This relationship
Quote the raven,
“Nevermore!”
The water between us
Saltier than the Dead Sea
The bitter taste quenches
My everlasting thirst
To feel and relinquish in
Your pain and anguish
Find company with my hatred
And treat him as your own
This sickly disgusting feeling
Separate us from each other
Like opposite that don’t attract
We run from the other
Stumbling and falling
Like broken glass

Author notes

this is just a really random poem and towards the end, i started this format that i came up with where you take the line before and make a sentence to go with that one.
(i.e. the dog came and went
to the park
cried the little boy
sucking his thumb)
get it?


lol

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  • Marty-McFly
    October 26

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    I like this...i like the format and i like the theme, uv really created something special here...keep it up, i wanna read more