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[untitled]2Whoever.

"why do I have such a hard time
creating characters?" i am asking whoever may be listening.
What can I do to save myself from this
uneasy and seemingly
impossible distraction. how am I
to surpass the speeding night and
pass under the overpass
but not to linger for too long.
My mother is waiting for me behind
unhappy doors.
And, I.
when I begin to have to share the daylight
we are both left stranded
empty handed.


even if the effing Sun never rises
I need to fix everything.

And THAT is sickening.

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  • oldschoolhero gold member
    October 27
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    the way you think is awesome
    the different way's we can know ourselves, is also awesome
    the way you write, is cooooool ;DD

  • sounds like destress im sry for that
    good luck and good writing