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I Am He



                            Sadly he fades into the night
                            no one around to console .
                            He leaves without everything
                            for to others he has no role.
                            A lonely man without a cause
                            stripped of all his honor.
                            As a man humillitated by distrust
                            never to be granted favor.
                            I am he, for I have failed
                            to win the hearts of my fellowman.
                            I am he, unable to mix amoung the crowd
                            like I am poison, a diseased man.
                           
                           
                           

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  • HopelessSuicide
    October 26

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    Hmmm

    I understand this more than you would know. But im not an outsider to others around me but to my own mind. Im the only outsider looking in. Im enforcing sin and breaking in. This piece has inspired me. You did a really terrific job xx


  • Insane killer Klown
    October 26
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    a poem that hits home for me i am an outsider my self never accepted in the in crowd so GOOD write
    good luck and good writing