Balming the hidden contemplations
As mystique healing strikes a chord,
Of those tangible-intangible nexus
Of you and me, here I question you, Oh lord.
Ignorant of the very purpose of my birth
And befooled by the redundant satire-of-death,
Upon the white-pages of silent proclamations
And writs reaffirming thy miracles and exclamations,
Eternally to emboss your patterns of uncertainty
With my perceptions open to reiterate your profundity,
At times harmoniously aligned and sometimes intercepted
As I struggle for the path from whom am distracted,
Arresting my quests of intellect
As I realize, lost in sensible-senselessness
A celebrating flight-of-ecstasy dawns
Dwelling into the unfathomable innate calmness,
Only to reach at an answer
Like those farsighted predictions of the wise seer,
With a question that is part-entangled here
and part-connected there to you, my lord Oh dear.
A contest entry
- to stay connected... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended October 31, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh my, this went to a deep place within my person, such a grasp, and to have that grasp expressed, well done poet, well done and congrats on your award
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" part-entangled here
and part-connected there to you"...this is a brilliant image of what so many of us are experiencing, and so beautifully written.
"At times harmoniously aligned and sometimes intercepted
As I struggle for the path from whom am distracted" ...Again, succinctly written with simplicity.
(I would only suggest to change the word 'whom' to 'which', unless youfeel it changes the meaning you sought. And to change the word 'thy'; a very old language usage which detracts from the modern and original thought process you write of so beautifully; to 'your'.)
I like the bareness of soul in your writing. It is energetic and inspiring. Seeking answers with respectful approach to the ONE. Wonderful writing. Peace, Rhonda
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Roaming in the interiar of the link with HIm with all your aspirations makes this work a wonderful talk..and brings the details of the soul in words...love it..well said...
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Roaming in the interiar of the link with HIm with all your aspirations makes this work a wonderful talk..and brings the details of the soul in words...love it..well said...
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Thank you so much for appreciating this work.
I can only say that it has been really really wonderful to participate in contests like the ones you are holding. Atleast in that pretext we get a lot motivated to come up with some thing new.
Many many sincere thanks and warm wishes to you.
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